![]() "opened about a month earlier" - "had opened" would be a better tense here."100 miles per hour (160 km/h) launch" - should be "100 mile per hour launch" - I don't think the Convert template accepts singular versions, so might have to write the conversion manually."After its opening, the media claimed Superman to be the fastest roller coaster in the world". "After Superman opened, the media claimed Superman as the fastest roller coaster in the world" - rephrase e.g."the first roller coaster to reach 100 miles per hour (160 km/h)" - to put this claim into context, what was the previous record? (The Kentucky New Era article has the details)."Originally known as Superman: The Escape" - why the italics here?.The lead could also do with information about the ride's current Record status.I think the lead could do with a bit more about the ride experience."The refurbished ride opened on March 19, 2011" - you don't need the footnote here."but was delayed due to several issues with the launch system." - maybe you could clarify that it was the launch system that was at fault in the History section of the article." the tallest and tied for the fastest " - "tallest and joint fastest"?."built by Intamin" - this also needs to be mentioned in the first History section of the article.Done Themeparkgc Talk 07:02, 22 March 2013 (UTC) Reply.I wonder if it's worth putting "(originally known as Superman: The Escape)" in the opening sentence?.Congrats from me too! - Khazar2 ( talk) 16:09, 13 April 2013 (UTC) Reply. ![]() Congratulations and keep up the good work! Moswento talky 16:07, 13 April 2013 (UTC) Reply The text and references have both improved, and there are no outstanding issues I can see. Thank you for addressing my points below - I'm now satisfied that this article meets the GA criteria.
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